Revise final drafts

English 11
Assignment Date: Fri, Nov 02, 2007

Comment on 3 other student essays on Mosaic website.

For each of your peers’ essays that you read, comment on all three of these questions.

1. Does the essay have one theme? Could you summarize what it is about in a single sentence?

2. Does the essay use anecdotes from the writer’s own life to show what he or she is like?

3. Does the essay draw on the readings to make points clear? Does it demonstrate knowledge and understanding of the readings?