Eng10 Comp: Revision: Tightening

English10 Composition
Assignment Date: Thu, Oct 26, 2006

In Class: Use this assignment sheet to guide you through three steps. First, review the information on tightening your essay from POWA. Second, read two of your fellow students’ essays, and make at least three specific suggestions for sentences that they can tighten. And third, revise your own essay, reading it sentence by sentence and asking whether each sentence could be tightened.