Polson High School</div>

<div class=
  • Home
    • Control Panel
  • PHS Websites
    • Writers' Studio
    • All Star Writers
    • Moodle
    • OurSpace
    • PHS Flickr
    • PHS Wiki
    • PHS Google Group
    • Reservation Timeline
    • PHS Main Page
    • Photography Club
  • Umphrey
    • Email Umphrey
    • Control Panel
    • Umphrey's Blog
    • Heritage Project
    • Teaching Notes
  • Assignments
    • Assignment Calendar
    • List: Advanced English 11
    • List: English 11
    • List: AP 12
My American Dream essay
  Writing a personal essay
Pre-writing questionnaire

Victor Hugo: There is nothing like a dream to create the future.
Will Durant:
The trouble with most people is that they think with their hopes or fears or wishes rather than with their minds.
Zadok Rabinowitz:
A man's dreams are an index to his greatness.

The Assignment:

Write a 3-5 page essay about what "the American Dream" means to you.
Be honest and speak in your own voice. Use anecdotes from your own life to clarify who you are and what you want or what you don't want. Focus less on WHAT you want to be and more on WHO you want to be. You can say what you are by giving a label--I'm a farmer--but to say who you are you need to tell a story. I'm the person who did this and said that. . .

Jot down notes and ideas as you think about things like, such as what do those "big themes" in American literature have to do with you? After all, everyone has experiences that force us to think about

community and family
liberty and oppression
justice and injustice
success and failure
innocence and experience

Most of the words in those big themes have been used in so many ways and for so many purposes, that they don't communicate much to a reader unless you slow down and talk about things that have actually happened to you that illustrate what you mean with them. In other words, you'll need to slip out of abstraction and be specific.

Run through the things we've read and what you really thought, in your private self. Think about these readings:
 

William Bradford: "A History of Plymouth Plantation"
John Winthrop: "A Model of Christian Charity"
Mary Bradford's story of growth through hardship
Ben Franklin's story of how he invented Ben Franklin--the virtues he sought
Patrick Henry "Speech"
Thomas Paine "Crisis"
Thomas Jefferson: "Declaration of Independence"
Frederick Douglass' quest for knowledge and freedom

You can agree or disagree with any of the writers we have read, using things they said as either good examples or bad examples.

Are there ways you wish your life was more like the lives of Pilgrims? Or ways you're glad your life is not like theirs? Is your dream similar to or different from the dream of living in a unified and loving community, as John Winthrop described, or from being dedicated to success, as Ben Franklin suggested?

What role does liberty play in your dream? What does it take to be free? What about equality? Justice? Money? Spirituality?

What virtues will you need to realize your dream? Are there aspects of yourself you think you need to change? What knowledge and skills will you need to master? What are you doing to get there?

Does your dream grow out of your family? Is your dream a continuation of a family dream, or a rejection of one?

How do you define success? Where might you want to be when you are 30? 50? 70?

Scoring Criteria:
1. Your essay has a clear theme. It makes a clear statement. It doesn't just wander around (on one hand, on the other hand etc.). It has at least 5 well-developed paragraphs.
2. Use of personal anecdotes that illustrate who you are--what you like or don't like. It's interesting.
3. Style: You write in active voice, with vivid verbs and precise nouns.
4. You make no fatal errors: Sentence fragments. Run-on sentences. Spelling errors. Capitalization errors.

Idea starters

Here's a Brainstorming Tool

Digital Essay: My American Dream (video by a high school student)

 

Posted by Michael L Umphrey on 12/11 at 08:27 AM
Permalink • Printer-Friendly • E-mail this page

Google Apps
Writers' Studio
PHS Online (Moodle)
OurSpace (Ning)
PHS Flickr
Photography Club (Google)
Photography Club (MySpace)
Find more photos like this on OurSpace

Today's Assignments

English 11:

Advanced English 11:

AP English 12:

Table of Contents

(all posts, sorted by category}

Search


Advanced Search

Category Menu

  • Advanced Placement
  • Class Logistics
  • Forms
  • Extra Credit
  • Grammar and Usage Guides
  • Classes
    • American Literature
      • Announcements
      • Handouts
      • Readings
        • Before 1800
        • Romanticism
        • Realism
          • Red Badge Courage
        • Modernism
          • The Great Gatsby
        • Contemporary
        • Local Studies
    • Composition
      • Announcements
      • Handouts
      • Online Text
      • Readings
      • Samples of student writing
    • Speech and Media Arts
      • Announcements
      • Handouts
      • Media Studies
        • Advertising videos
      • Readings
  • Photography Club

Members:
Login | Register

Most recent entries

  • “A River Runs Through It” Student Resources
  • Wind From an Enemy Sky Resources & Study Guide
  • Poems for Class
  • Puritan resources
  • Snow Falling on Cedars
  • Charles Dickens
  • Films available
  • Things Fall Apart
  • Vocabulary: Red Badge of Courage
  • Red Badge of Courage Resources
  • F. Scott Fitzgerald
  • Great Gatsby Resources for Advanced English 11
  • Ralph Waldo Emerson
  • Emerson resources
  • Huckleberry Finn Resources

Archives

  • Complete Archives
  • May 2011
  • March 2011
  • September 2010
  • August 2010
  • June 2010
  • April 2010
  • March 2010
  • February 2010
  • January 2010
  • December 2009
  • November 2009
  • October 2009
  • September 2009
  • August 2009
  • May 2009
  • April 2009
  • March 2009
  • February 2009
  • January 2009
  • December 2008
  • November 2008
  • October 2008
  • September 2008
  • August 2008
  • June 2008
  • May 2008
  • April 2008
  • March 2008
  • February 2008
  • January 2008
  • December 2007
  • November 2007
  • October 2007
  • September 2007
  • June 2007
  • May 2007
  • April 2007
  • March 2007
  • February 2007
  • January 2007
  • December 2006
  • November 2006
  • October 2006
  • September 2006

RSS Feeds

  • Distance Learning
  • RSS 2.0
  • Atom