Make sure your personal narrative:

1. focuses on a situation that caused you to change
2. orients readers with a clear narration of what happened
3. gives enough detail so the reader can understand why the experience was important
4. follows standard grammar, usage, mechanics, and spelling:


• Have I avoided sentence fragments?
• Have I used commas correctly in a series?
• Are my pronoun references clear?
• Have I checked the spelling of words I’m unsure of?

Posting in Mosaic

1. Be sure to select the category: English 10 Composition
2. Be sure to “submit” your post (or it won’t be saved)
3. Be sure the status is “open” (or it won’t appear published)

Above average writing model

Evaluation Score Sheet